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#1 Posted: Tue Jun 8th, 2010 05:16 am |
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DELETED. Last edited on Mon Jun 28th, 2010 11:18 am by Ted Cherry
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#2 Posted: Wed Jun 9th, 2010 10:36 pm |
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| Small edit of a comma.
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#3 Posted: Fri Jun 11th, 2010 01:07 am |
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Cute little study poem, Ted. ahh, yes! We were made to go forth and be fruitful.
And what's love got to do with it?
What is love?
Is there love?
Do you love?
Can you love?
Not you, Ted, just a fugitive of speech there.
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#4 Posted: Fri Jun 11th, 2010 01:45 am |
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| Figure of speech? Or inability to express?
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#5 Posted: Fri Jun 11th, 2010 04:09 am |
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Thanks Serah for the look and comment. much appreciated.
And thanks Bill for looking. Ted.
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#6 Posted: Wed Jun 16th, 2010 02:26 am |
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| Well... you can escape the breeding plan. But most people choose not to. Last edited on Sat Jul 10th, 2010 03:23 pm by Cappuchino
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#7 Posted: Wed Jun 16th, 2010 09:49 am |
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Yes David, you seem to have escaped Natures breeding trap. But, as you well know, NOTHING is impossible with God.  Ted.
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#8 Posted: Fri Jun 18th, 2010 01:23 pm |
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| Very True.
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#9 Posted: Sat Jul 10th, 2010 12:46 am |
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Ted,
Now that's what I call a brief poem.
Dale
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#10 Posted: Mon Jul 12th, 2010 05:04 pm |
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| It definitely keeps the comments pointed.
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#11 Posted: Sat Jul 24th, 2010 06:09 pm |
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I don't think I will comment on that comment:)
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